| This is Chapter one of the story i am currently writing. its my first big story line so comments and suggestions will be greatfully recieved! At the moment it is called The lost keepers but it might change as the story progresses! thanks! |
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Chapter 11Chapter 11. The next few days were difficult. The death toll only amounted to three and more than a dozen injured and the Leader was still unconscious. Funerals were held and this only increased Aynia’s feelings of guilt. Every time she spoke of it with Caiden he dismissed it by saying that they died protecting their family, but Aynia wasn’t convinced. It was time for them to move. If the Shade expected her to falter after the battle then he would be wrong, if anything she felt even more determined to succeed and drive him off the face of the earth. They had to find the others and soon. On the third day when they were in the mChapter 11
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Chapter 10Chapter 10. The environment changed in a blink of an eye like the evanescence thought of a moment. Chaos ran the night as the women and screaming children searched for safety as the men drew their swords and bows ready to defend their family and home from the unknown mist that spewed from the Leader’s mouth and coalesced in front of him in no form in particular.Chapter 10
Aynia and Caiden rushed to the front of the crowd of angry men to have a closer look at their enemy. “It’s him Caiden, It’s him. I know it.” “It isn’t a Shade though...maybe it’s just the spirits wanting to commune with
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MemoriesI walk through the endless corridors Of my mind, Knocking upon the doors That hold the secrets of myself.Memories
I grasp the cold handle And peer inside. There stood the candle
Of my mothers eye.
I see her run through the Garden of my youth, Laughing, smiling, exploring the Endless possibilities and adventures.
I stand there, eyes prickling With sadness. Where has that craving For adventure gone?
I close the door and look At myself. Hands dirty from the books I study.
My life is now an endless se
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Chapter 9Chapter 9. The morning went in a rush of talk and soon Ebony and her family left to make themselves ready. After Aynia had washed in the bath and put her hair up in a towel, she went to change into the dress she had been itching to try on. It fit perfectly. The middle fitted her figure nicely and the skirt complemented her short height. She found some purple shoes in the wardrobe and they went with it as if they were made to be worn together. There came a knock on the door and Lara came in. She unravelled her hair from the towel and started to comb through it, detangling and smoothing it out. She started to make a French plat of sChapter 9
by ~anelebach
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